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Your submission at Articles for creation: Scott Bruzenak (September 27)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Idoghor Melody was:

This submission is not adequately supported by reliable sources. Reliable sources are required so that information can be verified. If you need help with referencing, please see Referencing for beginners and Citing sources.

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Comr Melody Idoghor (talk) 22:42, 27 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi Idoghor Melody,

Thanks for reviewing this submission. I've cited RIAA (the Recording Industry Association of America) which is the sole body that issues platinum certifications. I've cited ASCAP (the largest Performing Rights Organization which represents songwriters). I've cited Pitchfork (a premiere music magazine in America). Can you explain why these sources don't meet Wikipedia:Reliable sources?

Thanks,

Oscar RandomFX (talk) 22:51, 27 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

You need to cite secondary sources to prove notability. Also, that resume was not "mysteriously deleted": it's resume information, not encyclopedic writing. Drmies (talk) 16:31, 6 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Noisecastle iii (October 6)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Gobonobo was:

This appears to be a duplicate of another submission, Scott Bruzenak, which is also waiting to be reviewed. To save time we will consider the other submission and not this one.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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gobonobo ⁺ ^c 02:53, 6 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

October 2023[edit]

Hello, I noticed that you may have recently made edits while logged out. Please be mindful not to perform controversial edits while logged out, or your account risks being blocked from editing. Please consider reading up on Wikipedia's policy on multiple accounts before editing further. Additionally, making edits while logged out reveals your IP address, which may allow others to determine your location and identity. If this was not your intention, please remember to log in when editing. Thank you. Drmies (talk) 16:30, 6 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Ah, this was a mistake on my part. I have made sure to re-log in to my Wikipedia account. Thanks for letting me know!

Best,

RandomFX RandomFX (talk) 17:15, 6 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Managing a conflict of interest[edit]

Hello, RandomFX. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on the page Draft:Scott Bruzenak, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for organizations for more information. We ask that you:

avoid editing or creating articles about yourself, your family, friends, colleagues, company, organization, clients, or competitors;
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In addition, you are required by the Wikimedia Foundation's terms of use to disclose your employer, client, and affiliation with respect to any contribution which forms all or part of work for which you receive, or expect to receive, compensation. See Wikipedia:Paid-contribution disclosure.

Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. Drmies (talk) 16:33, 6 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Drmies,

Thank you for referring me to the conflict of interest guideline. I've read it and made sure I am in compliance regarding the page Draft:Scott Bruzenak.

Best,

RandomFX RandomFX (talk) 17:14, 6 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Well? No disclosure of what seems to be an obvious conflict of interest? And that list of credits, with its primary sourcing, that's probably one of the most serious impediments to getting this article accepted. Drmies (talk) 17:56, 6 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Drmies, thank you for bearing with me because I'm a new editor. I'm not being paid to write the article, nor am I interested in promoting the subject. However, I am interested in documenting the subject because I'm an avid listener of one of the artists he produced for (Dawn Richard). Does this constitute a conflict of interest? Regarding the credits--I'm not quite sure what primary sourcing I looked them up on the ASCAP ACE Repertory and Apple Music. Should I provide an individual link for each credit? Or perhaps omit the list of credits from the page? Some guidance here would be useful.

Thanks,

RandomFX RandomFX (talk) 18:10, 6 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry I meant "I'm not quite sure what primary sourcing is. I looked them up on the ASCAP ACE Repertory and Apple Music."

Best,

RandomFX RandomFX (talk) 18:12, 6 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Drmies, I have updated the list of credits with individual references. RandomFX (talk) 21:46, 6 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

That's exactly what primary sourcing is. Please see Secondary sources. Drmies (talk) 22:44, 6 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Drmies. Can you help me understand how to do proper sourcing for album credits? When I look at most pop music albums on Wikipedia (for example V (Maroon 5 album), I see "Credits for V are adapted from AllMusic." with a reference to allmusic (https://www.allmusic.com/album/v-mw0002704238/credits) similar to what I have down for Draft: Scott Bruzenak. Is this considered a secondary source or a primary source? Perhaps the original album CD is the primary source and the online transcription of the credits is a secondary source? Thank you for bearing with me. RandomFX (talk) 16:48, 7 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

There is a huge difference between a few allmusic references on an album like that and dozens of em in a draft that is already sketchy in terms of sourcing. What you need to prove is notability, and you can't do that with a list of titles with primary sources. You need secondary sources to prove notability--and to produce an article that is decently sourced enough for AfC editors to pass on. Drmies (talk) 20:13, 7 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Scott Bruzenak (November 5)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tails Wx was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Does not pass the general notability guideline in its current state. The majority of references contain passing mentions.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Tails Wx 14:03, 5 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Noisecastle iii[edit]

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 03:06, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Concern regarding Draft:Scott Bruzenak[edit]

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 15:04, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Scott Bruzenak (April 14)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by TheChineseGroundnut was:

This submission's references do not show that the subject qualifies for a Wikipedia article—that is, they do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject (see the guidelines on the notability of music-related topics). Before any resubmission, additional references meeting these criteria should be added (see technical help and learn about mistakes to avoid when addressing this issue). If no additional references exist, the subject is not suitable for Wikipedia.

The comment the reviewer left was:

No changes since previous decline.

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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@T.C.G. [talk] 15:05, 14 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]