Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Johan Arnold Smellekamp

Johan Arnold Smellekamp[edit]

New article on a South African statesman of of Dutch descent of the mid-19th century. This article is part of a series of Orange Free State biographies. Looking for Start-status, if possible on the basis of quality B-status. Michel Doortmont (talk) 18:32, 11 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Minor comments You might consider expanding the lead per WP:LEAD, adding one or two free-use images if possible, and there are three years (1863, 1866 and 1859) which are linked when they probably don't need to be (don't have accompanying dates and are just years on their own). In the "Family" section, I would move that external link into a footnote. DrKiernan (talk) 14:45, 13 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]