Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/Aurelian

I would like to know what are the weak points of this article, and how to improve it.--Panarjedde 13:16, 3 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Nice start! Some remarks:

The article needs inline citations.
In the lead you have a whole seperate paragraph with its full name. I don't know if this is definitely necessary.
You don't have any information about his early years. Isn't there any available?
What was the "Palmyrene Empire", the "Gallic Empire" and the "Sassanid Empire". You should offer us some explanations I think.
After adding inline citations, you should reorganize "References and further reading". You put the sources you used in "References" and further material in "Further reading". "External links" is usually a seperate section.
Alphabetize categories at the end of the article.
I think you could add a section with assessments about Aurelian or with an analysis of his legacy, if the sources offer such a possibility.--Yannismarou 09:11, 4 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]