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02:44:35, 25 September 2022 review of draft by StevenMichaelson[edit]


I wanted to include this page, but I noticed that it has been decline, is there any way you can help me figure out what needs to be done to keep it from being decline.

StevenMichaelson (talk) 02:44, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@StevenMichaelson: did you read the chain of drafting comments going back six or so months? The central argument seems to be that an article on a film series needs at least three films , whereas this only has two. Looks to me like this is awaiting the release of the third instalment, and will be resubmitted then (hence the tag on it saying it shouldn't be deleted as stale, even if it goes unedited for longer than six months). -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:13, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I apologize, for I am very new at this. I just recently sign-up. I don't intend cause trouble. I'm just learning as I go along. StevenMichaelson (talk) 21:39, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
No need to apologise, you did nothing wrong. I just wasn't sure if you had read the comments. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 05:07, 26 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I understand. StevenMichaelson (talk) 11:47, 26 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

02:57:13, 25 September 2022 review of submission by Jagratyuva[edit]


 Courtesy link: Draft:National Educated Youth Union

why my article has been declined? The organisation NEYU is raising voice of lakhs of youth of India.

Jagratyuva (talk) 02:57, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Jagratyuva: this had been declined, and I have done so again, because it is not written in the neutral, factual manner required for an encyclopaedia; please rewrite it, without trying to promote the organisation, and without offering your own opinions or commentary.
The referencing also has issues. I've posted a comment with some advice; please take it. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 06:24, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

13:04:11, 25 September 2022 review of draft by Javan81[edit]


Javan81 (talk) 13:04, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Javan81: you need to read and understand the rules regarding referencing articles on living people (WP:BLP) using inline citations (WP:ILC). I have just declined this draft again, because there isn't a single inline citation in it. Every material statement, anything potentially contentious, and all private personal details such as DOB must be directly supported by reliable sources.
And please, don't just resubmit a declined draft without making any attempt to address the reasons why it was declined. It is unhelpful, and disrespectful to the reviewer. Not to mention that this draft has now been declined six times, and considering its lack of progress, I'd say it is fast approaching an outright rejection. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 13:20, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Forget outright rejection - six declines with no effort to fix the article is WP:Miscellany for deletion fodder. —Jéské Couriano v^_^v a little blue Bori 21:25, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

14:30:05, 25 September 2022 review of submission by Dhumik929192[edit]

Hello, i will improved my article. please review the article. Dhumik929192 (talk) 14:30, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Dhumik929192 your draft has been deleted as purely promotional. -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 16:05, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

19:52:14, 25 September 2022 review of submission by KingKong30[edit]


We need Gimkit to be moved into Artcle spaceKingKong30 (talk) 19:52, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

KingKong30, who is we? please see WP:PAID and WP:COI. Also the article has been rejected as you have failed to address any of the concerns raised by previous reviewers. Slywriter (talk) 19:56, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@KingKong30: You're better off showing news articles to the social media websites. (If they're demanding a Wikipedia article, they are lying to you; pretty much all of them will accept news stories.) —Jéské Couriano v^_^v a little blue Bori 21:24, 25 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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