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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 23 March 2022 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of awards and nominations received by Kajol[edit]

List of awards and nominations received by Kajol (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 03:09, 15 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Kajol is one of the most popular Indian actress in the 1990s. I am nominating the list because I think it covers completely all awards she received during her career. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 03:09, 15 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@ChrisTheDude: Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 04:30, 17 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Further comments
  • "one Stardust Awards." => "one Stardust Award."
  • "After made her debut" => "After making her debut"
  • "Kajol was honoured with Karamveer Puraskar" - no context as to what this is. Can you explain?
  • As the table is sortable, anything linked needs to be linked every time -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:08, 17 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude: Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 07:25, 17 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
You haven't linked the categories each time they appear...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:17, 17 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude: I forgot that, done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 11:02, 17 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Accessibility review (MOS:DTAB)[edit]

  • Tables need captions, which allow screen reader software to jump straight to named tables without having to read out all of the text before it each time. Visual captions can be added by putting |+ caption_text as the first line of the table code; if that caption would duplicate a nearby section header, you can make it screen-reader-only by putting |+ {{sronly|caption_text}} instead.
  • Please see MOS:DTAB for example table code if this isn't clear. --PresN 02:03, 31 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 03:24, 31 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by FrB.TG[edit]

  • "Kajol received critical acclaim and the Bengal Film Journalists' Association Award for Best Actress for playing a granddaughter in Udhaar Ki Zindagi (1994)" - surely you can be a little more descriptive when writing about her role than "playing a granddaughter".
  • "In 1998, she was nominated for Best Actress at Filmfare for Pyaar To Hona Hi Tha, Dushman and Kuch Kuch Hota Hai, winning the award for the lattermost." The films were released in 1998. She was nominated the next year. How about "Kajol was nominated for Best Actress at Filmfare for her 1998 films: Pyaar To Hona Hi Tha, Dushman and Kuch Kuch Hota Hai, winning the award for the lattermost"?
  • "Her performance as a twin in Dushman also won her a first Screen Award for Best Actress" - she did not play "a" twin only. It's only logical that both of the roles (twin sisters) were played by her.
  • In the table of content, you don't have to list every alphabet but only the ones that start with the names of the awards she has received.

This looks otherwise good. FrB.TG (talk) 13:56, 21 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 03:05, 22 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Support. Looks good. FrB.TG (talk) 15:18, 23 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from TRM[edit]

  • " 29 awards, including six ..." comparable values should be all words or all numerals.
  • Looks like she won 6 Screen Awards?
  • "thus becoming" no need for "thus".
  • "received another award of the same category for Gupt" clumsy, might just as well link Zee Cine Award for Best Actor – Female instead.
  • "Apart from acting awards, Kajol" maybe "Along with..." instead of "Apart from" and avoid single-sentence paragraphs.
  • I do not accept the inclusion of awards which don't have Wikipedia articles, i.e. that en.wiki consider to be non-notable, such as "POGO Amazing Kids Awards".
  • The state honours really need explanation as to their significance because apart from the Padma Shri award, there's absolutely no context for the reader as to what the award or awarding body mean and why it should be included.

That's it for me. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 21:05, 11 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:04, 12 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Nope, two of the honours are completely unexplained. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 00:21, 12 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Elaborate please? I have explained why she was given the honours in the lead. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 00:29, 12 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from DaxServer[edit]

As of this version

  • MOS:REFLINK puts citations as stand-alone. Wikilink all |work= parameters in references (details below)
  • ref 1 |work= to "[[Indian Express]]" (redirect is good; [[The Indian Express|Indian Express]] is also fine if you wish), remove the "The" infront as the newspaper titled as such; add |location=Madras (no wikilink)
  • ref 4 wikilink Filmfare
  • ref 5, 42 wikilink Rediff.com
  • ref 6 |title= to "Movie review: 'Kuch Kuch Hota Hai', starring Shah Rukh Khan, Kajol, Rani Mukherjee"
  • ref 7 |date= to 11 December 2001
  • ref 8 |title= to "Fanaa - Destroyed in Love"
  • ref 10, 27, 28, 34 - add |publication-place=Mumbai (no wikilink)
  • ref 14, 19, 33, 36, 38, 44 wikilink Bollywood Hungama
  • ref 11 add |publication-place=New Delhi (no wikilink)
  • ref 13, 16 |url-status=usurped
  • ref 15 add |publication-place=New York (no wikilink), URL seems live, at least accessible to me, - mark it as such?
  • ref 17 wikilink Bollywood Movie Awards and |url-status=usurped
  • ref
  • ref 20, 26, 38, 44 |url-status=live
  • ref 22, 36 |url-status=deviated and "publisher=[[Bollywood Hungama|IndiaFM]]" - It was still IndiaFM back then
  • ref 27, 28, 30, 32, 34 wikilink The Indian Express
  • ref 31 wikilink Screen (magazine)
  • ref 41 wikilink Zee Cine Awards
  • ref 43 wikilink Zee Cine Awards and |url-status=dead

— DaxServer (t · c · m) 13:50, 12 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Done. —Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 23:07, 12 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Thanks for your good work! — DaxServer (t · c · m) 06:36, 13 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

SP[edit]

  • Support. Additionally I've spotchecked, and it's a source pass. GeraldWL 07:44, 20 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Promoting. --PresN 13:46, 22 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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