User talk:Zhuo1221/sandbox

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I think it's pretty complete now, but it would be nice if the Affiliates section could be expanded and supplemented.@AYAO32269 AYAO32269 (talk) 02:19, 2 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Good evening @Zhuo1221

I read your article well. I think it would have taken a lot of effort to write it. Since it covers a lot of text, why not attach some pictures to make it easier for the viewer to understand. I think you can find some relevant content at Wikipedia Commons. Hanjiseung (talk) 11:12, 3 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]