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Your submission at Articles for creation: Korea's High school standardization policy (May 10)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Stevey7788 was:

Include more content. Use more references.

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— Stevey7788 (talk) 09:07, 10 May 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Korea's High school standardization policy (June 16)[edit]

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by AngusWOOF was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

What's with the Arguments For/Against? This looks like it was copied from some report analyzing the effectiveness of the standardization policy.

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AngusWOOF (bark • sniff) 16:03, 16 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Greetings from WikiProject Korea![edit]

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If you have any questions, don't hesitate to ask at the project talk page. We look forward to working with you in the future! Bonnielou2013 (talk) 21:58, 24 June 2019 (UTC)[reply]

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Your class project (Soc of Future 2019)[edit]

Good job starting Intelligent information society. Please add references to the beginning of the article, saying which scholars use this term and how do they define it. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 07:44, 20 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

re: Student Training Finished[edit]

Good job. Please try to WP:SIGN your posts correctly. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 10:23, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Good job signing your post! --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 10:47, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I have sent you a note about a page you started[edit]

Hello, Lim Ji Won

Thank you for creating Intelligent information society.

User:Doomsdayer520, while examining this page as a part of our page curation process, had the following comments:

Thank you for your new article on Intelligent information society, but note that other editors have already pointed out sources of confusion. Please consider modifying the article to reflect that this is a theory that is particular to South Korean politics.

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---DOOMSDAYER520 (Talk|Contribs) 15:41, 16 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Article topics[edit]

Good choices, both articles on the book and the test can use a large expansion on Korean Wikipedia. Please add them to the course's dashboard. PS. Also, please read WP:BOTTOMPOSTING. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 02:41, 20 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback on your Korean drafts[edit]

They look like a good start. Please make sure to add hyperlinks (blue links). It is probably a good idea to translate the title of references to Korean as well. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 01:36, 26 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Good job, they look much better! --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 06:51, 4 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback "튜링테스트"[edit]

Hello, I'm Cha Juhee from the Social Development Studies class. I will read your article and leave feedback. By looking at the Turing test's explanation, I realized that there were theories supporting and opposing the Turing test. It is also a good idea to explain the theory of support and opposition in detail in an individual list. Since there is a long introduction to Turing tests, it's best to divide these descriptions into different lists. I think they also made good use of objective materials such as papers. Juhee Cha (talk) 06:21, 24 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback on your project for Social Development class[edit]

I think it is time to finish your drafts (ko:사용자:Lim Ji Won/유년기의 끝 -> ko:유년기의 끝 and ko:사용자:Lim Ji Won/튜링 테스트 -> ko:튜링 테스트). Please ping me when you are ready for me to review them in more detail. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 07:46, 5 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Very nicely done! For 유년기의 끝 I suggest adding information on whether there was a Korean edition (date, ISBN, etc.). And if there is one, youi can try to take a picuture of the book in the library and add it to the article. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 01:33, 18 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Good job finishing your assigmnent, the articles look very nice! --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 08:41, 21 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Nomination of Intelligent information society for deletion[edit]

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toobigtokale (talk) 07:57, 2 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]