User talk:Jayauteur

Welcome to Wikipedia. A page you recently created, Florida Youth Orchestra, may not conform to some of Wikipedia's guidelines for new pages, so it will shortly be removed (if it hasn't been already). Please use the sandbox for any tests. For more information about creating articles, you may want to read Your first article. You may also want to read our introduction page to learn more about contributing. Thank you. --Orange Mike | Talk 14:58, 22 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

The language used was still too promotional and advocative. You're not supposed to be doing a fundraiser, you're supposed to be providing impartial description. The same applies to anybody else's articles, incidentally; you can tag them for advertising language, etc. if you spot them. --Orange Mike | Talk 20:15, 22 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]