User talk:Jamiwats

February 2015[edit]

Please do not add commentary or your own personal analysis to Wikipedia articles, as you did to American Boychoir School. Doing so violates Wikipedia's neutral point of view policy and breaches the formal tone expected in an encyclopedia. Thank you. --Orange Mike | Talk 18:46, 10 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The article about the American Boychoir violates Wikipedia's intention to provide a "neutral point of view." My revisions of today do. Write me at <jamie.watson@ww-p.org> JamieJamiwats (talk) 21:51, 10 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Your revisions so far seem to lean on personal experiences (not a reliable source, and display a desire to minimize the gravity of what happened as reported by actual reliable sources. --Orange Mike | Talk 02:59, 13 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I disagree with your lightly informed analysis. The Lessig/Hardwicke assertion that ABS institutionally had no response to discourage instances of sexual abuse is also based on his own highly prejudiced "personal experiences" and not supported by the actual events of April 1969, before he attended ABS. The media has filtered out any reliable sources that repudiate Lessig, following always the most sensational scent. Shall I provide more sources of my own?