User talk:Angelalhan

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Nikkimaria (talk) 16:31, 13 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Re:user name and contribution[edit]

Thank you for your note, I did get it - I was just a bit busy yesterday. Extra credit point awarded, keep up the good job! --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk} 22:15, 13 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Re:Blog[edit]

Yes, I saw it, good job! --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk} 17:36, 1 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Gender aspects of globalization in China[edit]

Just so you know, the content that you contributed to at Talk:Gender aspects of globalization in China, which was deleted as the talk page of a nonexistent article, has been restored and moved to User talk:Dagypt/Gender aspects of globalization in China. -- Ed (Edgar181) 19:59, 19 October 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Your contribution to the draft[edit]

I am looking forward to seeing your section today. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk} 17:40, 2 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

That's a good start, but you'll need more content, and to add wiki hyperlinks. Also, you should merge your draft with drafts of your other group members (currently here). You should be working on the same article, not on separate ones. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk} 17:15, 3 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Good job with your edits here, but you should try to incorporate your edits into your group article here first. Then your group article should be moved and replace the article you just created. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| talk} 23:08, 5 November 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Regarding your fixes to the article: good job, but some of the things that were struck out haven't actually been fixed, so I've unstruck them. If you have questions about those points, feel free to ask. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 15:16, 9 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Re your questions: copy-editing means checking for style and grammar problems. The best way to do this would be to read it out loud or to get someone else to read it out loud, as editing the same page for a long time can make it difficult to catch style errors. Encyclopedic tone is a widespread problem in student-created articles, which tend to be either overly academic or too conversational. You want to avoid arguing points, inserting opinions/emotions, making judgments, using too much jargon or colloquialisms - in short, present the facts in a neutral way (like an encyclopedia) instead of presenting a point of view (like an essay), and do so using appropriate language. Cheers, Nikkimaria (talk) 18:12, 9 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

ArbCom elections are now open![edit]

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