User:Atampir
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- /sandbox1 - contains the information from the original article for Apocalyptour, which has been merged with StarKid Productions
- /sandbox2 - contains edits made for Bandstand (musical)
- /sandbox3 - contains edits made for StarKid Productions
Needs Improvement Articles[edit]
- Pondicherry - the most dire improvements that this page needs is additional citations, focused mainly in the Pondicherry § Urban agglomeration and Pondicherry § Tourism sections. The urban agglomeration has absolutely no sources to back it up, and is not reliable. Pondicherry § Economy could stand to be expanded as well.
- Kettle - This is a fairly good article, however one of the main things that pops out to me is the Kettle § Kettle gallery. It is a strange addition to the page and not necessary. The Kettle § Etymology also seems to stick out, as is fairly out of place in regards with the rest of the article.
Potential Articles[edit]
- relies heavily on quotations
- style not appropriate for Wikipedia
- sources may not be reliable
- synopsis is written more like an essay
- too detailed
- can be reorganized
Assessment of Chosen Articles[edit]
Bandstand (musical): The main audience that I can distinguished for this article are people who are interested in musical theatre, especially musicals that have been involved in fairly recent Broadway seasons. The article itself has a very sparse history, as there is nothing on Talk:Bandstand (musical). History-wise, the more current edits are smaller scale things, such as reorganizations and cleaning up of opinions and such. It has good bones for a good article, as it has most of the relevant information one would be looking for in an article for a Broadway show. Its main issue is the essay-like tone in which it is written. Comparing it to Carousel (musical), a featured musical theatre article, it follows a conventional organisational method. As far as editing goes, my current plan is to reorganize and cut down on the information in the Lead and also fixing the tone of Bandstand (musical) § Synopsis.
StarKid Productions: The audience for this article ranges from fans to people interested in unconventional musical theatre. Unlike Talk:Bandstand (musical), Talk:StarKid Productions has quite a bit of activity on it. Main editors on this article seems to be fans that want to make the article as easy to follow as they can, especially in regards to the very long back-and-forth on Talk:StarKid Productions § Cast/Crew Tables. This section indicates that this article has vigilant editors, and I expect to interact with them during my editing process. For editing, I might try expanding on the StarKid Productions § History, and might try condensing StarKid Productions § Soundtrack albums, as the peak chart positions section seems too sparse to be there. I'd like the revisit the cast and crew tables discussion, as currently there's no information about it in the article. I'd also like to tackle the issues stated in the banners at the top, but I am currently not sure how to approach them.