Template:Did you know nominations/Treaty of London (1915)

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The result was: promoted by Theleekycauldron (talk) 10:19, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Treaty of London (1915)

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... that rejection of the 1915 Treaty of London promises by the Triple Entente after the World War I created the sense of mutilated victory in Italy? Source: "Patiotic sentiment was transformed into nationalistic grievance at a victory in the war now being 'mutilated' by Italy's Allies and by the government's inability to protect Italy's national interests." Morgan, Philip (2007) Italian Fascism, 1915–1945 [1], p. 45

Improved to Good Article status by Tomobe03 (talk). Self-nominated at 09:17, 24 November 2021 (UTC).

Note: reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Volcanic and igneous plumbing systems for QPQ
Its a good article for DYK and you probably invested quite some time in the article but could you maybe find an additional hook? As to me it could use some more flow. Maybe start with ...that the rejection of the promises in the Treaty of London... ? Or ...that the inability to secure the promises of the Treaty of London by Italy caused ...? Paradise Chronicle (talk) 23:14, 28 November 2021 (UTC)

ALT1: ... that incomplete fulfilment of promises made in the 1915 Treaty of London created the sense of mutilated victory in Italy after the World War I? --Tomobe03 (talk) 09:23, 30 November 2021 (UTC)

Paradise Chronicle did you get a chance to look at ALT1? Tomobe03 (talk) 17:53, 5 December 2021 (UTC)

No, but now I did. Thank you for the ping.Paradise Chronicle (talk) 00:09, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Good to go. GA, long enough and Copyvio unlikely. Paradise Chronicle (talk) 00:09, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Tweaked ALT1 to T:DYK/P3