Template:Did you know nominations/Toni Leviste
- The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 18:37, 1 November 2011 (UTC)
Toni Leviste[edit]
- ... that equestrian Toni Leviste was the first Southeast Asian to compete in the Show Jumping World Cup?
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- There are primary sources used, though they appear to meet the guidelines at WP:PRIMARY. Can someone verify this? Also, as per Wikipedia:REFPUNC, citations should be placed after punctuations.--Lionratz (talk) 04:18, 8 October 2011 (UTC)
In checking the primary sources mentioned by Lionratz, I found that the "Equestrian Park" section of the article contains some statements that aren't supported by the cited sources. DYK does not generally require that every statement in the article be attributed to a source, but I think that statements like "Most of the country’s competitive equestrian training takes place in this facility" need support. --Orlady (talk) 15:04, 16 October 2011 (UTC)
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- Sorry, but the new source still doesn't support the statement that "Most of the Philippines' up and coming competitive equestrians train in this facility." It says that an equestrienne from Canada "recently concluded a two-day intensive show jumping clinic at the Leviste Equestrian Park in Lipa City with some of the Philippines up and coming show jumping stars." One clinic does not convert to a broad statement about "most". --Orlady (talk) 18:07, 20 October 2011 (UTC)
- Well having that statement within the prose doesn't really affect the hook, neither would the article nor the expansion size. Took it out as not to create complications. Please let me know if you have other concerns within the day. I will be taking a wikibreak, in-lieu of a family member passing over the last few days. --TitanOne (talk) 14:29, 24 October 2011 (UTC)
