Template:Did you know nominations/Thy Strong Word did Cleave the Darkness

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 01:46, 14 January 2024 (UTC)

Thy Strong Word did Cleave the Darkness

Created by Fritzmann2002 (talk). Self-nominated at 22:46, 4 December 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Thy Strong Word did Cleave the Darkness; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.
Overall: OK as-is but I suggest ". . . that "Thy Strong Word did Cleave the Darkness" substituted its theme of "light from above" for the anti-war protest of the earlier hymn it replaced" (or similar with the short title as you have it). Also, the New York Times article is the most independent source, and has more information about the circumstances of the hymn's addition to the hymnal that would benefit the article--I added a bit, but I think it would be good to clarify a bit more, for example that the 1982 hymnal did not, as one might guess, come out in 1982. blameless 04:31, 9 December 2023 (UTC)