Template:Did you know nominations/Target House, London

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The result was: promoted by Victuallers (talk) 14:53, 20 August 2015 (UTC)

Target House, London[edit]

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Target House, London.

~~... that The Times of London thought that the towers on Target House (pictured) made the observer say "ouch"?~~

Reviewed: Dutch letter.

Created by Philafrenzy (talk). Self-nominated at 13:43, 29 July 2015 (UTC).

Nominated four days after creation so new enough, article long enough. No close paraphrasing or neutrality issue detected. The hook is sourced to reliable source. --KAVEBEAR (talk) 20:22, 5 August 2015 (UTC)

@Philafrenzy and KAVEBEAR: This hook does not appear to be neutral to me. Focusing only on an aspect of a mixed review that sounds negative places undue weight on it. How about this instead? ~ Rob^Talk 03:03, 8 August 2015 (UTC)

ALT1 ... that The Times of London praised the Target House for its boldness but said its towers made observers say "ouch"?

I support the alternative hook as well.--KAVEBEAR (talk) 03:18, 8 August 2015 (UTC)

@KAVEBEAR: Feel free to restore the tick if you agree the ALT meets all criteria; I proposed it, so I'm unable to. ~ Rob^Talk 03:49, 8 August 2015 (UTC)

--KAVEBEAR (talk) 04:00, 8 August 2015 (UTC)