Template:Did you know nominations/Sir Mark Palmer, 5th Baronet
- The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:47, 21 August 2014 (UTC)
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Sir Mark Palmer, 5th Baronet[edit]
- ... that Sir Mark Palmer, a godson of Queen Elizabeth II, started an early male modelling agency before leading a band of New Age travellers?
- ALT1:... that Sir Mark Palmer, Page of Honour and godson to Queen Elizabeth II, led a band of New Age travellers?
- Reviewed: Alexander Sinton Secondary School
- Comment: tweaks and other hooks welcome
Created by Edwardx (talk), Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Edwardx (talk) at 22:18, 8 August 2014 (UTC).
- I've copyedited the hooks the Queen --> Queen Elizabeth because, much as I think she's a dear old gal, there are other queens, and MOS calls for this (at least, I think it does -- correct me if I'm wrong). Or how about
- ALT2:... that Sir Mark Palmer, First Page of Honour and a godson of Queen Elizabeth II, led a band of New Age travellers who moved about in horse-drawn caravans?
EEng (talk) 21:54, 9 August 2014 (UTC)
- I'd suggest specifying which Queen Elizabeth we are talking about, i.e. calling her Queen Elizabeth II. Her mother was also Queen Elizabeth, and I've seen such quirky hooks on DYK that I first thought this Queen Elizabeth would turn out to be the 16th-century Queen Elizabeth I. Anyway, the article is new and long enough. I have not detected any copyright violations, but the claim that Palmer was the First Page of Honour is not supported by an inline citation, so I cannot approve the hook. Surtsicna (talk) 18:34, 15 August 2014 (UTC)
- Fixed. Philafrenzy (talk) 19:09, 15 August 2014 (UTC)
- I'd suggest specifying which Queen Elizabeth we are talking about, i.e. calling her Queen Elizabeth II. Her mother was also Queen Elizabeth, and I've seen such quirky hooks on DYK that I first thought this Queen Elizabeth would turn out to be the 16th-century Queen Elizabeth I. Anyway, the article is new and long enough. I have not detected any copyright violations, but the claim that Palmer was the First Page of Honour is not supported by an inline citation, so I cannot approve the hook. Surtsicna (talk) 18:34, 15 August 2014 (UTC)
These hooks are fine, but on reviewing the article I wonder if we can't do better... I mean, there's Eton, the waifish coverboys, and Christine Keeler -- can we work in the third man somehow? Just if someone wants to dig a little. EEng (talk) 14:40, 19 August 2014 (UTC)