Template:Did you know nominations/Propaganda of success
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The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 19:39, 16 September 2013 (UTC)
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Propaganda of success[edit]
- ... that propaganda of success was extensively used by propaganda in the People's Republic of Poland of the 1970s?
- Reviewed: Jørgen Olufsen's House
Created by Piotrus (talk). Self nominated at 07:30, 10 September 2013 (UTC).
- It's hard to find space for new conceptual articles on Wikipedia, but I think Piotrus has done a good job here. Cool.
- Article is long enough, new enough and well sourced. Hook fact is interesting and can be verified here here.
- My only request: Piotrus, can we tweak the grammar of the hook just a little bit? For example, to:
- Alt1 ... that propaganda of success was extensively used during the 1970s by the People's Republic of Poland?
- Or a more radical change:
- Alt2 ... that 1970s propaganda in the People's Republic of Poland exploited the technique of exaggerating political and economic successes?
- Or a different change? I just think the ending is a little clumsy the way it's worded now.
- Thank you for this contribution and happy September to you. groupuscule (talk) 04:45, 15 September 2013 (UTC)
- Certainly, as the creator I am fine with either of the alts. Let the closing admin select a favorite out of those two, thanks for the suggestion. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 12:59, 15 September 2013 (UTC)
Great. Good to go; promoter's choice between Alt1 & Alt2. groupuscule (talk) 18:20, 15 September 2013 (UTC)
