Template:Did you know nominations/Panna Naik

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:27, 22 March 2018 (UTC)

Panna Naik[edit]

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~~... that Gujarati writer Panna Naik worked at Van Pelt Library in the University of Pennsylvania?~~

Ref: [Brahmabhatt, Prasad (2010). અર્વાચીન ગુજરાતી સાહિત્યનો ઈતિહાસ - આધુનિક અને અનુઆધુનિક યુગ [History of Modern Gujarati Literature – Modern and Postmodern Era] (in Gujarati). Ahmedabad: Parshwa Publication. pp. 139–141. ISBN 978-93-5108-247-7.] (Source is offline and in Gujarati)([1] Just a mention here for English reference (primary))

Reviewed: Sankaralinganar

Created by Nizil Shah (talk). Self-nominated at 13:01, 21 February 2018 (UTC).

Article is new enough and long enough. Should "His grandfather Chhaganlal Modi" be her? No pic to review. Article is neutral and well referenced. AGF on the non-English sources. Did some copy editing. Hook is correctly formatted but not interesting. Hook fact in the article lacks an inline cite immediately after it. No copyvios found. I note that each of the main paragraphs has six references after it. This is bad practice as it means the reader can't tell which part of the paragraph they are intended to support. It can't be the final sentence in each case. These references should be more integrated into the body of each paragraph so that the sources of the text are clear. New hook required. Philafrenzy (talk) 07:54, 26 February 2018 (UTC)

@Philafrenzy:, thank you for reviewing the article and copyediting it. "His" is changed to "her" (typo). I have reorganised references to their proper places. You can suggest new hook. I am proposing few alternatives.

~~ALT: ... that Gujarati poet Panna Naik moved to the US as a bride?~~([2])
~~ALT2: ... that Gujarati poet Panna Naik has three masters degrees; in Gujarati and Sanskrit languages, in Library Science and in South Asian Studies?~~ ([3])

Thanks, I am not supposed to tick something I have proposed but what about being influenced by Sexton? Philafrenzy (talk) 11:44, 26 February 2018 (UTC)

Regards,-Nizil (talk) 11:33, 26 February 2018 (UTC)

ALT3: ...that Gujarati poet Panna Naik was inspired to write by Anne Sexton's Love Poetry?

@Philafrenzy: Is it OK? I was unsure about interesting hook so asked to suggest. Thanks for the suggestion.-Nizil (talk) 11:27, 27 February 2018 (UTC)

I tweaked the hook and was going to tick it but the source (ref 7) appears to be dead. Do you have another source for this information? Philafrenzy (talk) 12:40, 27 February 2018 (UTC)

@Philafrenzy:, I have added archived url from Internet Archives for it. Thanks for hook tweak. Regards,-Nizil (talk) 04:51, 28 February 2018 (UTC)

Thanks, I see that is sourced to the authors own blog in Gujarati but it is not controversial so I am going to AGF and tick it. Philafrenzy (talk) 07:02, 28 February 2018 (UTC)