Template:Did you know nominations/Lionel Fraser
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The result was: promoted by Hawkeye7 (talk) 11:12, 12 August 2014 (UTC)
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Lionel Fraser[edit]
- ... that Sir Lionel Fraser was the father of Groovy Bob?
- ALT1:... that Lionel Fraser worked in naval intelligence, and was the father of Groovy Bob?
- Reviewed: Ian Grist
Created by Edwardx (talk), Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Edwardx (talk) at 18:07, 4 August 2014 (UTC).
- New within 7 days of nomination
- Long enough, >2000 characters
- not a stub, though I had to evaluate that myself and change the classification -- see the article talk page
- Hook cited in-line to source which verifies the hook.
- I cleaned some prose that was pushing close to the sources. It looks fine now, though I will certainly not object if another editor gives it a second glance.
- Sources are reliable and are cited accurately. Article is neutral.
- I like the ALT1 hook myself, as it discusses the man himself, not just his son.Moishe Rosenbaum (talk) 01:23, 12 August 2014 (UTC)