Template:Did you know nominations/Clifford Hall (painter)
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The result was: promoted by 97198 (talk) 01:53, 19 October 2014 (UTC)
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Clifford Hall (painter)[edit]
- ... that in his later career, Clifford Hall painted women covered almost head to toe and with their faces usually hidden?
- Reviewed: not a self-nom
- Comment: hook could be a bit snappier, but I'm struggling to see quite how at present
Created by Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Edwardx (talk) at 09:55, 15 September 2014 (UTC).
age and size check out. No too-close paraphrasing seen. The hook is uncited at present, and if used, should have words to the effect of "in his later years" or "later career" or something as it was only late on that he was doing this. Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 04:30, 17 September 2014 (UTC)
- Revised hook and added to refs. Philafrenzy (talk) 13:13, 17 September 2014 (UTC)
- The first para of Later work is where an inline ref is needed. Cheers, Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 23:35, 17 September 2014 (UTC)
- Added that. Philafrenzy (talk) 00:15, 18 September 2014 (UTC)
This article is new enough and long enough and is now sufficiently referenced. The hook fact has inline citations. No policy issues detected. Ready to go. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 09:39, 18 October 2014 (UTC)
