Template:Did you know nominations/Brian Lohse

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The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:08, 10 February 2020 (UTC)

Brian Lohse

Created by Vycl1994 (talk). Self-nominated at 02:11, 1 February 2020 (UTC).

  • Hi Vycl1994, review follows: article created 31 January; article (just) exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to what appear to be reliable sources; I didn't notice any overly close paraphrasing of the sources aside from common turns of phrase; hook is interesting, mentioned in article and backed up by the sources; a QPQ has been carried out. Looks good to me - Dumelow (talk) 22:49, 2 February 2020 (UTC)
Apologies, Dumelow, a Powerball ticket of higher value was sold in Iowa in October 2018. The fact about Lohse, as stated above, is dated, and should be rephrased. I have updated the article itself. Kindly review the below. Vycl1994 (talk) 07:56, 3 February 2020 (UTC)
ALT1 that Brian Lohse was elected to the Iowa House of Representatives in 2018, six years after he and his wife won US$202 million in the state's Powerball lottery jackpot?
ALT2 that Brian Lohse was elected to the Iowa House of Representatives in 2018, six years after he and his wife won what was then the state's second-largest Powerball lottery jackpot?
Ah, good point. ALT1 and ALT2 are fine - Dumelow (talk) 08:56, 3 February 2020 (UTC)