Talk:Ted Bundy

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Good articleTed Bundy has been listed as one of the Social sciences and society good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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Edit request[edit]

Introduction contains a grammatical error: "He would then luring her to a vehicle parked in a more secluded area (...)" This should say "lure" or "begin luring"

Besides this minor error, the whole paragraph is worded strangely. I suggest "her" be replaced with neutral terms such as "his victims" or "the victim" etc. I can write a proposed edit if needed. NaniTheDandelion (talk) 09:45, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Adjusted as requested.--Kieronoldham (talk) 21:09, 26 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Unclear sentence[edit]

The first sentence of the second paragraph doesn't make any sense, as far as I can tell.

Bundy often employed charm to disguise his murderous intent when kidnapping victims, and with law enforcement, the media and the criminal justice system to maintain his claims of innocence.

Perhaps a word is missing. In any case, I think it needs to be addressed, but I don't know how to fix it, because I'm really not sure what it's trying to say. I've added a Clarify tag to it. LibreLearner (talk) 01:35, 28 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]