Talk:Second Battle of Newtonia Site/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:25, 29 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]


I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:25, 29 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • No DABs
  • Images properly licensed
  • supplies and soldiers were lost to capture Howzabout a simple "captured"?
    • Done
  • Blunt was considering ordering an overall withdrawal why "overall"?
    • Not sure. Removed
  • Additional Union army artillery?
    • Fixed.
  • artillery position on ridge missing word?
    • Indeed. Added.
  • Compress the history section, there's a lot of stuff there that doesn't really relate to Price's Raid or the battle.
    • Trimmed about a third of it, including everything pre-1864. @Sturmvogel 66: Is this better, or does a little more need to go?
      • No, looks good. I would suggest that some photos would be useful if you can find them. Battlefield markers, overall views from a height and/or surviving structures would be subjects.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 12:22, 8 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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