Talk:PwC tax scandal

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The title[edit]

Should this be named PwC Australia tax scandal - or just PwC tax scandal?

Also - how do you get around any confusion of people wanting to contribute - whether to post to the PwC main page (where there's still a big slab on this topic) - or here - or both? 1.43.41.96 (talk) 05:26, 28 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Some thoughts:

For now I don't think the title needs more clarity, but open to other opinions
I think the subject calls for more detail and structure than is possible in the PwC main page, especially given the complaints from other editors about the bloated "Issues" section there. I think it's ok to have both pages, with more detailed information here, and a more basic description on PwC

20WattSphere (talk) 05:33, 29 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed, however, we may need to include the name in the year. DenverCoder9 (talk) 01:41, 7 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Cleanup: indirect language[edit]

The language is very verbose, in a way that misses the core of what's being said. For example, these two sentences mean the same thing:

"the investigation identified a number of specific examples where professional standards were breached with respect to misuse of confidential information"

"the investigation revealed multiple abuses of confidential information"

But the first is much longer and seems to lose the point in word salad. I'm trying to clean up the article. Help if you can! DenverCoder9 (talk) 02:37, 7 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]