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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 13:25, 13 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:25, 13 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead[edit]

  • Per the template, genres need sources.
  • The "list_episodes" parameter is unnecessary per infobox television.
  • Runtime also needs a source.
  • In the lead, add a serial comma after Mark St. Cyr.
  • Also add a serial comma after "ABC".
  • Done. I did my best at sources for the genres and runtime. SatDis (talk) 01:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Premise / Cast and characters[edit]

Episodes[edit]

  • "practise" → "practice" (consistency with article)
  • "implores for the" → "implores the"
  • Remove the commas after "separating" and "romantic moment".
  • There appears to be a word missing between "prevent her overthinking".
  • "The cast discover" → "The cast discovers"
  • Per MOS:TVPLOT, plot summaries should be "no more than 200 words per episode"
Episode three is at 206 words.
Episode seven is at 208 words.
Episode ten is at 206 words.
  • Done. All episodes are now under 200 words. SatDis (talk) 01:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Production[edit]

  • "which depicted" → "that depicted"
  • Remove the comma after "commenced in February 2020".
  • "present day" → "present-day"
  • Add a serial comma after Howard Ashman.
  • The quote in the reference after "idea for a series" doesn't seem necessary.
  • The phrase "write drafts of a script" sounds wordy, so try rewording.
  • The last sentence in the second paragraph seems out of place. Try moving it to the first.

Release[edit]

  • Fix the [better source needed] issue.
  • Add a serial comma after "ABC".
  • "labelled" → "labeled"
  • Add a comma after "January 17, 2020" per WP:DATECOMMA.
  • Per WP:TRAILER, #Marketing should not simply list when trailers were released, but reactions people had to them.
  • I have decided to remove the "Marketing" section as I don't believe it is necessary. SatDis (talk) 01:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Reception[edit]

  • Excellent #Critical_response section! Not too many quotes, which passes WP:RECEPTION.
  • Accolades is missing a Artios Awards nomination.
  • Also, shouldn't the nominees column be after "category"?
  • Wow, thanks for the feedback! Usually my "Critical response" section isn't up to scratch. Thanks for finding the nomination, fixed. SatDis (talk) 01:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References[edit]

  • The Futon Critic can be archived using archive.today.
  • PopSugar is not reliable, so I would remove/replace it.
  • Mark references from Los Angeles Times with "|url-access=limited".
  • Thanks for the tips. Fixed. SatDis (talk) 01:47, 17 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Progress[edit]

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Response[edit]

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