In the quotebox it should say GamesRadar+ as that is the websites name
In Resident Evil 7: Biohazard, players takes Ethan's – takes needs to be singular
the local merchant, The Duke, that she can – commas are not needed around The Duke
kidnap Rosemary and he was trying to protect – comma before and
such as Chris Moyse from Destructoid or Liana Ruppert from Game Informer – or should be changed to and
Josh West from GamesRadar suggested – should say GameRadar+
Resident Evil 7 is unprecedented, and noted that Capcom had never – no comma before and
Resident Evil protagonist, and felt an unskilled everyman – comma before and is not needed
overwhelming odds subverts player expectations of – overwhelming odds, subverting player's expectations of
a game (Resident Evil 7) that upsets – change the parentheses to brackets
A lot in the reception starts with John Cena from WWE.com. Change it up a little bit so its not monotonous and say things like WWE.com's John Cena or John Cena, writer at WWE.com. For other examples you can look at other fictional characters' reception section
could not recall his name, and felt that the player was – comma before and is not needed
along with Jill Valentine and Lady Dimitrescu – comma after Dimitrescu
2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline.
Change GamesRadar to GamesRadar+ in the refs
I don't think the postscript for Behind the Voice Actors is needed as it is a reliable source and was put on the list of sources at WP:RSP after I did an RFC about its reliability a little bit ago.
2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose).
Woah... this is my first article that I didn't find an unreliable source in
The copyvio detector picked a 42.9% violation from one website and 31% from another. The second one id definitly copying from Wikipedia. I can tell because of the date. The first one I cannot tell, but usually websites do not write in the way Wikipedia does for a plot.