Talk:Dental public health
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Pictures[edit]
Hey guys! I am really liking the pictures that are being put up! Is there any way we can make the world fluoridation picture any bigger? --A.M.Deckert (talk) 00:47, 3 May 2017 (UTC)
- I like the idea of putting the map of the world showing all the places that receives fluoridated water--RayOH (talk) 01:02, 3 May 2017 (UTC)
- Hey guys, I've adjusted the image to a more simple size, let me know your thoughts, I'm not too sure if it should be any smaller. Thank-you for your recommendations. MAbdelkdous (talk) 01:45, 3 May 2017 (UTC)
- Looks really good! Much easier to read! --A.M.Deckert (talk) 01:51, 3 May 2017 (UTC)
- Hey guys, I've adjusted the image to a more simple size, let me know your thoughts, I'm not too sure if it should be any smaller. Thank-you for your recommendations. MAbdelkdous (talk) 01:45, 3 May 2017 (UTC)
- I like the idea of putting the map of the world showing all the places that receives fluoridated water--RayOH (talk) 01:02, 3 May 2017 (UTC)
Referencing[edit]
I have just noticed the referencing at the end of the page is not consistent, there is a mixture of Vancouver and APA. We might have to go through and change to the same --Mellere (talk) 03:05, 3 May 2017 (UTC)
- Good pick up! I'll have a read through, maybe this is something we can address at the next meeting. --A.M.Deckert (talk) 06:18, 5 May 2017 (UTC)
- Yes I have just noticed this as well, maybe we can have a session where we work on clearing the whole page up including the references and make everything succinctMAbdelkdous (talk) 06:19, 5 May 2017 (UTC)
- I agree, I also had some of my work taken down so I was thinking maybe we could discuss this as well? It might just need some rewording and better referencing, hopefully we can find a way to make it work. --06:26, 5 May 2017 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by A.M.Deckert (talk • contribs)
- I am having trouble uploading my information as I keep being told I am not referencing it correctly and would really like it if we can sort it out at our next meeting. I won't try and put it up again as it keeps being deleted. --A.M.Deckert (talk) 02:34, 7 May 2017 (UTC)
- I've attempted to edit my work and address the referencing, lets hope it worked! ---A.M.Deckert (talk) 23:42, 9 May 2017 (UTC)
- I am having trouble uploading my information as I keep being told I am not referencing it correctly and would really like it if we can sort it out at our next meeting. I won't try and put it up again as it keeps being deleted. --A.M.Deckert (talk) 02:34, 7 May 2017 (UTC)
- I agree, I also had some of my work taken down so I was thinking maybe we could discuss this as well? It might just need some rewording and better referencing, hopefully we can find a way to make it work. --06:26, 5 May 2017 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by A.M.Deckert (talk • contribs)
- Yes I have just noticed this as well, maybe we can have a session where we work on clearing the whole page up including the references and make everything succinctMAbdelkdous (talk) 06:19, 5 May 2017 (UTC)
Academic Resources[edit]
If anyone comes across some good academic resources related to dental public health, please add to this section. Probably better to stick with journals --Mellere (talk) 07:52, 5 May 2017 (UTC)
- Never mind, I removed the section, I don't think it's relevent --Mellere (talk) 06:11, 10 May 2017 (UTC)
Formatting[edit]
I have rearranged a few of the headings to try and make it flow better, let me know what you think --Mellere (talk) 06:09, 10 May 2017 (UTC)
- I just read over the page and it looks great! I think it was a good idea to rearrange some of the headings to make it flow better. Let me know if there is anything specific you'd like me to do. --A.M.Deckert (talk) 08:32, 20 May 2017 (UTC)
Concerns about the page[edit]
I have some concerns about this page. I've read through the whole thing now, removed and reworked a little bit of it, and I must say that it reads like multiple student papers put together. I'll do some more cleanup and then add some refs. Thank you. ApproximateLand (talk) 21:24, 14 March 2021 (UTC)