Ana María Sempértegui is currently a Politics and government good article nominee. Nominated by Krisgabwoosh (talk) at 18:26, 2 November 2023 (UTC)
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Short description: Bolivian politician (born 1958)
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Spot check on Ana María Sempértegui was born on 15 December 1958 in Potosí to a family of humble means involved in the department's mining industry - what's the supporting text for "a family of humble means"? I think it's from a different source to those cited.
Spot check on a mine mechanic stationed at Pailaviri, and his wife Elena Valdez Tardío, a career homemaker - what't the supporting text for this?
Spot check on She then enrolled at the women's lyceum Sucre - no issues
"lent her services to private sector corporations" - isn't it better just to say that "she worked for private sector corporations"?
Spot check on his personal accountant. - no issues
Chamber of Deputies
Spot check on giving him great latitude to select candidates as he saw fit - no issues.
"The result: Sempértegui was elected to" - Maybe just state that Sempértegui was listed and elected?
"No sooner did the elections come to pass than CN – devoid of either clear leadership or ideological coherence – fell apart as an effective parliamentary alliance" - was this before the elecion? Wording makes it look like it was at the same time.
"Sempértegui's tenure made headwinds in the development of children's rights law." I don't think headwinds is the right word here.
Spot chek on Absent their political benefactor, Sempértegui and other Paredes allies were not nominated for reelection come the 2014 elections" - the entry for Sempértegui says that she was not re-elected; I don't see it supporting "Absent [her] political benefactor".
Lead
"1985 to 1986 and 1988 and 1989." - needs a tweak, I think
Im not sure about the phrase " became a woman of confidence" - maybe just confidant?
"Paredes secured Sempértegui's election to parliament in 2009" - could do with some expansion, I think.
"His exile meant she was not re-nominated in 2014." - as above, I'm not sure this is currently supported by the cited text.
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